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Please let me know what you think.

This is the first of a series of exercises I am doing to improve my storytelling. So please let me know what you don't understand. If the characters aren't coherent, or if the backgound is bad.

These are the things I'm trying to improve, of course let me know if you like it also, encourgement is never too much.

Thanks
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I think the story and characters make perfect sense to me. WIth regard to the background, maybe adding something into the sky would help, such as in the panel (I guess it would be 9) just to help with the angle because there is no horizon.